Happy Birthday Tarotgal!!
Main
Rules
Titles
Authors
Fandoms
Bunnies

Title: A Promise Kept
Author: Hermione Eveningfall
Fandom: Titanic (note—this is a "Jack lives" story so it is obviously AU)
Bunny #: 14
Rating: G-PG (mild language)
Disclaimer: All of the characters names belong to James Cameron
A Note: This is dedicated to the wonderful Tarotgal, who, through her brilliant talents has helped me considerably with my stories, and bringing such enjoyment with her own. Thank you very much and have a wonderful birthday! I hope you enjoy!

 

A Promise Kept

It was so dark, so cold. Every part of his body felt numb, and he felt as though someone were suffocating him with a pillow. But he didn't mind, really. He was so very tired. And he knew his Rose kept her promise. He even thought he smelled her sweet perfume-sweet as the lazy summer days when the rich flowers were in bloom.

Someone was singing softly in his ear, a song he recognized… one he'd known since childhood. "Come Josephine in her flying  machine…going up she goes…up she goes…" Rose sat beside Jack's cot in the Carpathia's infirmary, holding  tightly onto his hand. The events of the previous night left her  completely overwhelmed, more in shock than anything else. A single  tear fell down her cheek as she remembered the hundreds of bodies  screaming and thrashing for help in the icy North Atlantic.

She smoothed his warm greatful that he was still with her. `Please  wake up, Jack,' she begged, choking on a soft sob. His cheeks were  slightly blue and dark shadows beneath his eyes. Hypothermia. She  shuddered, remembering the physician's diagnosis. Jack had been in  the water longer, unable to fit onto the piece of debris he'd  insisted she continue to use. At first, when the lifeboat came back,  he would not wake up when she shook him or called his name. Ice  clung to his face and his hair, and he truly did look dead. Right  before she prepared to send him to the deep abyss, he'd gasped for  air, choking on lungs filled with water. Carrying him with her,  she'd swum to Officer Wilde's body, stealing the whistle from his  mouth.

When the lifeboat picked them up, Jack slipped into unconsciousness  again, and had not woken since. "My sweet Jack," she whispered, her  shoulders shaking as she began to cry softly, pressing his hand to  her lips in a soft kiss.

Jack's mind registered the sound of the sobs, though all he could  see around him was darkness. He fought to open his eyes, he fought  to speak, but all he could do was lay helplessly still. Rose. Rose lay her forehead on the mattress, wanting desparately to crawl  in beside him. Balance yourself like a bird on a beam…she sung in a  shaky voice, stroking Jack's cheek with her fingertips.

The tickle started slowly, originally a strange pressure behind his  eyes. No matter how hard he tried, he couldn't ignore it.

"Eh…" Rose heard the gasp, and immediately lifted her head. She saw Jack's  slender nose twitch and she couldn't help but feel a sense of relief  to know that he was going to be fine.

"Eh…eh Chshhhh!" the sneeze was so sudden that it caused Jack's  crystal blue eyes to snap open. He sniffed weakly, too exhausted to  rub his nose. His vision was blurry, but he could tell he was not in  the water anymore, judging from the white all around. Was he  dead? `I'm certain I would not be sneezing if I were,' he thought  miserably.

"Bless you," a female voice whispered into his ear. `She really is  here. If she kept her promise, I most certainly am not dead.' He  turned towards the sound, finally focusing on her face, on her  bright red hair. She was smiling, her green eyes filled with  love. "Oh Jack," she gasped. "I thought…" she chewed on her lower  lip worriedly.

"Rose?" he croaked, feeling completely parched. His throat was  burning, his lips were horribly chapped.

"Yes, Jack. It's me. And we're going to be all right. You're safe  now." She pulled the thin, gray blanket up to his neck, trying to  keep him as warm as possible.

"You kept your promise," he whispered. She nodded. "I would never break a promise." She kissed his hand. Then, without warning, "Eh…eh Chshhhh!" Jack sneezed a second time,  the realization of the throbbing pain in his had finally coming to  him.

"God bless you!" Rose frowned, sighing. "I'm sorry, Jack, I don't  have any handkerchief's with me." She reached into the pockets of  her new outfit, frowning when she came up empty handed. "But I have  to go and fetch the doctor. He told me to get him when you woke up."  She started to stand, but then quickly placed a small kiss on his  lips. "I'll be right back." Rose hurried away, the heels of her  shoes tapping along the tile floor. Every noise seemed to multiply  itself by one hundred, and Jack closed his eyes tightly, trying to  block the pain.

She returned with the middle-aged doctor moments later, and Jack  broke into a fit of harsh coughing just at that very moment. His  chest ached, and the itch invaded his nose again. "Eh—Chsshhuh!  HuhEshhhuh!" There was no doubt that he was coming down with a cold.  He always tended to sneeze in doubles when he got sick.
"Blessings," the doctor told him through a thick, brown mustache. He  wore a pair of dark brown trousers, a tan cotton shirt and a pine  green vest, though that was covered by a white overcoat. He handed  Jack a clean handkerchief, and flipped through his charts. Jack blew  his nose, but even that normally simple process was absolutely  exhausting. "You are another hypothermia victim." He nodded in  understanding, and felt Jack's forehead, checked his pupils, and  felt his pulse. "I would hesitate to release him for at least  another couple of days, Mrs. Dawson," the doctor told Rose with a  sympathetic expression.

Jack blinked. Had he heard the doctor correctly? Mrs. Dawson? He  looked at Rose who's cheeks turned pink, but she did not turn away.
"He will be all right, won't he, doctor?" She asked. "He sounds like  he's coming down with a cold." She frowned at the harshness of his  cough, and felt more tears prick the corner of her eyes. The physician nodded. "Which is exactly why I am keeping him in bed  for a couple of days. When we reach the city, I will check him  again, to see whether or not he is fit enough to leave Ellis Island.  But, he's a strong man, so I have no doubts that he'll pull through  this with flying colors. He is already mending very nicely." Jack snorted. If he was mending nicely, then why did he still feel  so terrible? "HuhEshhhuh! HehChuuush!" He sighed wearily.

"Mr. Dawson, I am going to bring you a cup of tea, which should help  with the congestion." The doctor turned to Rose. "Would you care for  a cup as well, Madame?" Rose shook her head, massaging the back of Jack's hand with her  thumb. He was starting to feel warm again. When they were left alone  together, Jack cleared his throat, wiping his nose with the  handkerchief.
"Rose. You took my last name." He attempted to sit up, but fell  backwards, out of breath.

She smiled. "I'm sorry, Jack. It just…when you were so sick after we  were rescued, I was not thinking straight. I said the first name  that came to my mind." He could not hide his pleasure. "You do not have to apologize,  Rose." He squeezed her hand. "I love you. I am honoured that you  thought of me first." It was his turn to gain rosy cheeks. Rose wrapped her arms around him at last, holding him close,  burying her head against his shoulder. "Jack Dawson, there is no one  in the world I would want to spend the rest of my life with than  you. I want to be with you, always and forever." Jack closed his eyes, sighing in content. "Always and  forever, my Rosie." He brushed loose curls away from her eyes. "Will  you marry me and be the real Rose Dawson?" Rose covered her mouth with her hand, feeling as though she  were floating on a cloud. She had never felt happier in her entire  life.

"Yes, Jack." She whispered, finally deciding to crawl into  the bed beside him. "I will." A week later, the Carpathia reached the New York City  Harbor, bringing a mixture of sadness and happiness to all who  looked upon the famous Statue of Liberty. Jack and Rose stood at the  rail, a gentle rain falling, soaking them from head to toe. When at  last the ship pulled to a stop, the two of them gazed into each  other's eyes before making their way down the ramp and to a new  life.

Main
Rules
Titles
Authors
Fandoms
Bunnies
present
tarotgal's birthday challenge 2004
Created & Organized by
girlwithtulips & Annalisa
candles