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Title: A Promise Kept
A Promise KeptIt was so dark, so cold. Every part of his body felt numb, and he felt as though someone were suffocating him with a pillow. But he didn't mind, really. He was so very tired. And he knew his Rose kept her promise. He even thought he smelled her sweet perfume-sweet as the lazy summer days when the rich flowers were in bloom. Someone was singing softly in his ear, a song he recognized one he'd known since childhood. "Come Josephine in her flying machine going up she goes up she goes " Rose sat beside Jack's cot in the Carpathia's infirmary, holding tightly onto his hand. The events of the previous night left her completely overwhelmed, more in shock than anything else. A single tear fell down her cheek as she remembered the hundreds of bodies screaming and thrashing for help in the icy North Atlantic. She smoothed his warm greatful that he was still with her. `Please wake up, Jack,' she begged, choking on a soft sob. His cheeks were slightly blue and dark shadows beneath his eyes. Hypothermia. She shuddered, remembering the physician's diagnosis. Jack had been in the water longer, unable to fit onto the piece of debris he'd insisted she continue to use. At first, when the lifeboat came back, he would not wake up when she shook him or called his name. Ice clung to his face and his hair, and he truly did look dead. Right before she prepared to send him to the deep abyss, he'd gasped for air, choking on lungs filled with water. Carrying him with her, she'd swum to Officer Wilde's body, stealing the whistle from his mouth. When the lifeboat picked them up, Jack slipped into unconsciousness again, and had not woken since. "My sweet Jack," she whispered, her shoulders shaking as she began to cry softly, pressing his hand to her lips in a soft kiss. Jack's mind registered the sound of the sobs, though all he could see around him was darkness. He fought to open his eyes, he fought to speak, but all he could do was lay helplessly still. Rose. Rose lay her forehead on the mattress, wanting desparately to crawl in beside him. Balance yourself like a bird on a beam she sung in a shaky voice, stroking Jack's cheek with her fingertips. The tickle started slowly, originally a strange pressure behind his eyes. No matter how hard he tried, he couldn't ignore it. "Eh " Rose heard the gasp, and immediately lifted her head. She saw Jack's slender nose twitch and she couldn't help but feel a sense of relief to know that he was going to be fine. "Eh eh Chshhhh!" the sneeze was so sudden that it caused Jack's crystal blue eyes to snap open. He sniffed weakly, too exhausted to rub his nose. His vision was blurry, but he could tell he was not in the water anymore, judging from the white all around. Was he dead? `I'm certain I would not be sneezing if I were,' he thought miserably. "Bless you," a female voice whispered into his ear. `She really is here. If she kept her promise, I most certainly am not dead.' He turned towards the sound, finally focusing on her face, on her bright red hair. She was smiling, her green eyes filled with love. "Oh Jack," she gasped. "I thought " she chewed on her lower lip worriedly. "Rose?" he croaked, feeling completely parched. His throat was burning, his lips were horribly chapped. "Yes, Jack. It's me. And we're going to be all right. You're safe now." She pulled the thin, gray blanket up to his neck, trying to keep him as warm as possible. "You kept your promise," he whispered. She nodded. "I would never break a promise." She kissed his hand. Then, without warning, "Eh eh Chshhhh!" Jack sneezed a second time, the realization of the throbbing pain in his had finally coming to him. "God bless you!" Rose frowned, sighing. "I'm sorry, Jack, I don't have any handkerchief's with me." She reached into the pockets of her new outfit, frowning when she came up empty handed. "But I have to go and fetch the doctor. He told me to get him when you woke up." She started to stand, but then quickly placed a small kiss on his lips. "I'll be right back." Rose hurried away, the heels of her shoes tapping along the tile floor. Every noise seemed to multiply itself by one hundred, and Jack closed his eyes tightly, trying to block the pain.She returned with the middle-aged doctor moments later, and Jack broke into a fit of harsh coughing just at that very moment. His chest ached, and the itch invaded his nose again. "EhChsshhuh! HuhEshhhuh!" There was no doubt that he was coming down with a cold. He always tended to sneeze in doubles when he got sick. Jack blinked. Had he heard the doctor correctly? Mrs. Dawson? He looked at Rose who's cheeks turned pink, but she did not turn away. "Rose. You took my last name." He attempted to sit up, but fell backwards, out of breath. She smiled. "I'm sorry, Jack. It just when you were so sick after we were rescued, I was not thinking straight. I said the first name that came to my mind." He could not hide his pleasure. "You do not have to apologize, Rose." He squeezed her hand. "I love you. I am honoured that you thought of me first." It was his turn to gain rosy cheeks. Rose wrapped her arms around him at last, holding him close, burying her head against his shoulder. "Jack Dawson, there is no one in the world I would want to spend the rest of my life with than you. I want to be with you, always and forever." Jack closed his eyes, sighing in content. "Always and forever, my Rosie." He brushed loose curls away from her eyes. "Will you marry me and be the real Rose Dawson?" Rose covered her mouth with her hand, feeling as though she were floating on a cloud. She had never felt happier in her entire life. "Yes, Jack." She whispered, finally deciding to crawl into the bed beside him. "I will." A week later, the Carpathia reached the New York City Harbor, bringing a mixture of sadness and happiness to all who looked upon the famous Statue of Liberty. Jack and Rose stood at the rail, a gentle rain falling, soaking them from head to toe. When at last the ship pulled to a stop, the two of them gazed into each other's eyes before making their way down the ramp and to a new life. | |||||
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